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tonight i feel alive
the dusk and dawn of night
persuade my wings to fly
and as an angel i see her listening
to sounds fall from the sky
the influence of night
persuade my wings to fly

and the signs that list the levels dim
on a ledge overlooking everything
do these lights mean anything to you?
would you dance above the city? let it envelop
in the smoke of icarus clouds
as we leave the ground down

don't look beside you
but forget she is there
the wind in the air is in love with the sky
and i am romance
between the stars and concrete construction
a hand on the breeze in summer night
we are
©2008-2009 ~aRedPaintedHeart
:iconaredpaintedheart:

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:iconblueeyesopenalways:
Beautiful.

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Mend this careless thread, has gone askew.
:iconaredpaintedheart:
hehe, well i am a genius with titles. this title is my finest i think.
:iconamomenttothink:
'would you dance above the city?'
mm.

i like this.
:iconaredpaintedheart:
it's about a parking garage
:iconamomenttothink:
nu uh...
o.O
ooooooo :]
:icondarkmagerikku:
I feel, like I'm on top of a building. Or my old apartment building.

My favorite part: "do these lights mean anything to you?
would you dance above the city?"

Peace, -Dakotah

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"When the love of power overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace." -Hendrix

"It matters not WHO you love, WHERE you love, WHY you love, WHEN you love, or HOW you love. It only matters THAT you love." -John Lennon
:iconaredpaintedheart:
thank you.
i wrote it about a parking garage in downtown.

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