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in rhetoric to circumvent this nature
responsive in the indignation of liturgical labor
or to withdraw from the corporation of communal observation
indifference is sequential
these eyes are dead to the thought
will you relinquish your heart?
this intellect is worthless to the emotive bliss of ignorance
and the pithy strength of heart abides still, resenting
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:icondarkmagerikku:
The flow of this one is amazing.
And the rhyme structure.
It just flows so well.
It gets across this kind of detatched point of view, yet that's not quite it.
That's what I see, anyway.

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It is time to be positive.
In a world of hate there has to be a light.
Maybe this day can be the day the youth <strikeout>makes a difference</strikeout>.
No more hate.


:iconaredpaintedheart:
thank you very much. and thank you for your input.

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